From my preliminary task I feel that the clip looked good and entertaining. When reading my feedback from my preliminary task I saw that I had said the camera was shaky as we had to do the over the shoulder shots with a freehand because of the height. I improved this on my main horror film as it wasn’t shaky unintentionally and the reason it was shaky was to add the tension and scary effect. In both pieces of work I used transitions and titles so they are similar in this aspect and both had the same effect. However I feel that it worked better in the horror film because of the transitions e.g. over laying the words on the clips. This shows the film to be more professional as most films over lay the writing and titles on the clips. This had to be done as there was more things to be said during the opening of the horror film. So I have learnt that when you have a lot more to say that you should overlay it on top of the clips or create an opening sequence as the wait can be boring making the audience uninterested.
Also I have learnt how to improve the sound effects and dialogue. “I think further challenging myself would be to have more lines to make it more understandable what is the theme of the film.” I said this from the feedback of my preliminary task; I think we were able to do this as there was much more dialogue involved which made the theme more understandable. From my previous feedback I can see that I had trouble making the clips understandable which was a big problem with my first horror film as the lighting was to dark and was messy and difficult to understand. However the second horror film clip improved as we had better lighting and more scenes to make it clearer. So from my preliminary task to my recent horror film the lighting in both had been the same. In the preliminary task we had no soundtrack and only one sound effect which was a bleep. In my horror film however we used more sound to create tension which I think worked well and improved it massively. So I have learnt that sound makes the work more interesting and adds good effects.
The amount of camera angles and transitions we used are about the same. We used a range of shot types which I think made the clip a strong piece of work and we did the same In the preliminary task and horror film. As we were in a park it was more difficult to get certain angles because of how open planned it was unlike in school as there were doors, buildings etc. which transitions we only used one in the prelim task and more in the horror film. In both clips we used effects to smooth the cut from clip to clip. However in the horror film we used effects like ‘ghosting’ in order to get the creepy effect which wasn’t needed in the preliminary task.
Overall I think I have learnt a lot between the preliminary task and the horror film, and my experience from the prelim made my horror film better. As my horror films had things added which my preliminary didn’t.


